Parting
Everyone looked from afar as Wu Hei walked into the Blue Clouds Road. Under the veil of the blue clouds, it was absolutely impossible to see what Wu Hei had encountered within the Blue Clouds Road. However, after a mere moment, that bestial roar once again rang out.
“Wu Hei? Another person sent to his death,” Beside Qin Yu, Hou Fei said in a low voice.
Qin Yu also nodded.
The length of the Blue Clouds Road was close to five thousand kilometers long, while the earlier Reverend Ming Shan had died only after entering for a short while. Qin Yu dared to be sure, and estimated that Reverend Ming Shan did not even cover ten percent of the journey’s distance. That also meant that Reverend Ming Shan had died even before meeting with the true danger.
That Wu Hei, how much stronger was he compared to Reverend Ming Shan huh?
*Hou……* An extremely furious roar rang forth, but it began to weaken after a mere moment.
Almost at the same time, Du Zhong Jun, Man Gan and the others looked at the Soul Jade Slip on the ground that belonged to Wu Hei. Wu Hei’s Soul Jade Slip was still intact, and it definitely did not break.
“Ah, it seems like Wu Hei has passed the first trial of the Blue Clouds Road,” Man Gan smiled and looked at Du Zhong Jun. “Du Zhong Jun, maybe he’ll have the same luck as the chance to step on dog shit, and actually arrive at the other end of the Blue Clouds Road — The Nine Heavens huh.”
Du Zhong Jun only smiled.
How could the Blue Clouds Road be that easy to surmount huh? Everyone at the white jade plaza had even heard that earlier growl, and it was evident that the location of battle was very near to the white jade plaza.
“Whether Wu Hei is able to arrive at the Nine Heavens, that is very hard to say. However, at least he has walked further than Ming Shan,” Du Zhong Jun smiled indifferently while taking a look at Hua Yan at the same time, as if he was very complacent.
Hua Yan’s face was expressionless. He was only quietly listening to sounds carried from the Blue Clouds Road.
“Mmm, the sound of heavy collisions,” Ao Feng frowned. “It was a bestial roar at the beginning. Unless, there is a kind of Demon Beast at the forefront of the Blue Clouds Road…… and now, there are also heavy collisions. Ah, it looks like…… there are still living people within Ni Yang’s Realm.”
Even if it were a Demon Beast, for it to be capable of killing Reverend Ming Shan, it should definitely also have sufficient cultivation to take on a human form, and already possessed human knowledge.
Ni Yang’s Realm was not exactly uninhabited. There were also living Demon Beasts and living people within it.
Man Gan also frowned and nodded. “Mmm, ah, Immortal Emperor Ni Yang’s initial subordinates might also be inside Ni Yang’s Realm. Wrong…… wrong.”
Man Gan’s eyes suddenly glinted, and he secretly began to ponder. “When Immortal Emperor Ni Yang had initially entered the Mortal Realm from that place, there were absolutely no subordinates.”
“Where did the current subordinates come from? Also, where did that bestial roar come from?” Man Gan continued to consider in silence. “Unless, they are people that Immortal Emperor Ni Yang had initially taken in from the Mortal Realm? Not possible, those people would also have Ascended when they achieved the domain level required for Ascension.”
“Unless, it’s the ten thousand……” Man Gan’s eyes lit up.
At that moment, Ao Feng also gave Man Gan a strange, momentary smile.
Man Gan also returned a cold smile to Ao Feng.
Meanwhile, both Hua Yan and Du Zhong Jun instead had not thought of where that bestial roar came from.
“Brother Ao Feng, you are even thinking of competing against me for this thing?” Man Gan had directly used a Transmission Talisman and sent a transmission message. He did not want to let both Hua Yan and Du Zhong know that, that thing was also actually in Ni Yang’s Realm.
“Brother Man Gan, there is no need to call it ‘this thing’. Isn’t it just that scroll huh? I definitely think that you have also guessed what that treasure is. Ah, this had really shocked me. To think that this scroll is actually also in Ni Yang’s Realm, this really is a sudden and incidental pleasant surprise. With the exception of that piece of treasure which the various important leaders of the Immortal, Devil and Demon Realms covert, in the entire Ni Yang’s Realm, ah, this scroll should at least be ranked second to that. I had still thought that Immortal Emperor Ni Yang would have bestowed this scroll to a predestined person, and did not think that it had instead remained at Ni Yang’s Realm. If I were to obtain it…… humph, even if I, Ao Feng, am a Gold Dragon, my status in the Dragon Clan will also be comparable to that of a Five-Clawed Gold Dragon!”
Ao Feng’s transmission message obviously expressed his determination towards that ‘scroll’.
“All right, you want to obtain it, while I also want to obtain it. When the time comes, we will have to see our real capabilities,” Man Gan stated using his Transmission Talisman.
Ao Feng responded by giving Man Gan an indifferent smile.
Instead, he secretly had an idea. “Now that the various important leaders of the Immortal, Devil and Demon Realms had all broken through the barriers between the two realms, enabling the Emissaries of the various Ascendant Realms to descend and obtain that plaything, it will also not be a death penalty even if I am to fail in obtaining that treasure. Why not…… use that hidden resort and compete for this scroll? Once I obtain it, my status will definitely undergo a drastic change.”
Under the instructions of their respective leaders, the four great Emissaries were all competing for that legendary treasure.
However, even if they had managed to obtain it, they would still need to give it to their respective leaders. They did not exactly have any benefits. That was why…… it was still better to bear the crime of being incompetent, and instead seize that scroll.
To use that hidden resort in the battle to compete for the scroll, Ao Feng’s selfish desires were already set.
Ao Feng could not be blamed. After all, that item was too famous. If it were the Ascendant Realms, how could someone of Ao Feng’s caliber even manage to lay his fingers on that kind of treasure?
“Ah…… If I manage to obtain it, ah, my capabilities will definitely increase by more than ten times!!!” Ao Feng could feel his heart trembling, his desire to compete for that scroll was already at the peak.
He was excited, so how could Man Gan not also be excited?
At that moment, only both of them had guessed the existence of that scroll, while Hua Yan and Du Zhong Jun were instead still clueless.
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*Peng!* A crisp and clear sound, as if a piece of jade had burst and cracked open, resounded throughout the white jade plaza. Wu Hei’s corresponding Soul Jade Slip had finally cracked into pieces.
An entire six hours. After entering Ni Yang’s Realm, Wu Hei finally died after six hours.
“The side of the Loose Immortals and the side of the Loose Devils have already sent people. It’s now your Dragon Clan’s turn,” Man Gan smiled while looking at Ao Feng. In a very indifferent tone, Ao Feng said, “Elder Yan Shan, I have to trouble you to make a move.”
There were three great Elders in the Dragon Clan — Yan Shan, Ao Xu, and Ao Yan.
However, Ao Yan had already died during the incident at the Scattered Treasures Cliff, leaving only the two great Elders Yan Shan and Ao Xu. Yan Shan was a Silver Dragon in the domain level of a Twelfth Tribulation Loose Demon, while Ao Xu was instead a Black Dragon in the domain level of an Eleventh Tribulation Loose Demon. Yan Shan’s capabilities were obviously stronger by one level.
Compared to Reverend Ming Shan and Wu Hei, the capabilities of a Twelfth Tribulation Silver Dragon were the strongest.
“Elder Yan Shan, be careful,” Fang Tian said and entrusted to Yan Shan.
“Patriarch, My Lord Emissary, just be at ease,” Yan Shan said and smiled, then promptly walked into the Blue Clouds Road in a calm manner.
Man Gan smiled indifferently and said, “Brother Ao Feng, I can see that your this, whatever Elder Yan Shan’s capabilities are still very strong huh, and is at least significantly stronger than Wu Hei. Ah, I definitely think that he is able to surmount the Blue Clouds Road.”
“Whether he is able to pass through or not will depend on his own capabilities. It is useless to also say it now.” Ao Feng said with an indifferent smile.
At that moment, both of them had already begun to secretly compete against each other.
For that scroll, they were willing to kill the other party at all costs.
As Man Gan looked at Ao Feng, he imagined giving a cold smile. “His Highness is still really generous. It might be that my status as a Super Divine Beast Purple-Eyed Bull Demon King came in useful, to actually have a Low Grade Divine Equipment bestowed unto me. Although it is the lowest tier offensive Low Grade Divine Equipment, it is also a lot more powerful than a Finest Grade Immortal Equipment.”
“If I manage to obtain that scroll, my capabilities will increase by at least more than ten times. There will also be a lot more hope during the time to compete for that piece of treasure which His Highness requires.” The Man Gan of that moment was absolutely unable to calm his mind down.
He was constantly thinking about that scroll.
From Man Gan’s point of view, that piece of scroll was really precious to the extreme. After all, even the important leaders of the various realms had initially failed in their attempts to obtain that very scroll, and it was only obtained by Immortal Emperor Ni Yang at the end.
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“Big Brother. It has already exceeded six hours, and that Dragon Clan’s Elder is still not dead. Ah, it looks like he has a very good chance to pass through,” Hou Fei was extremely relaxed. After all, at that moment, he was only waiting for Ascension.
Instead, Qin Yu did not speak.
“Fei Fei, Xiao Hei, do both of you feel that both Man Gan and Ao Feng’s demeanour are a little messy?” Qin Yu said in a low voice.
Those three brothers were whispering to each other at one end of the white jade plaza. At the center of the white jade plaza, Hua Yan, Ao Feng and the others also did not notice.
“Correct, both Man Gan and Ao Feng do not have their previous calm appearances. It is as if both of them are like tigers choosing a man to bite, and they both have a kind of crazed dispositions.” Hou Fei carefully looked for a while, then replied in a low voice.
Qin Yu also nodded.
Hua Yan, Du Zhong Jun, Zong Jue and Fang Tian also sensed the change in both Ao Feng and Man Gan’s demeanour.
“Hai, Brother Ao Feng. We still have not begun competing for that plaything, and even if you manage to seize it, it will also be given to the Dragon Emperor. Is it necessary for you to have such a crazed appearance huh? Ah, aren’t you a little too agitated?” Du Zhong Jun voiced out.
Ao Feng took in a deep breath, then smiled and said, “He is about to arrive at the Nine Heavens, so I am quite agitated. Ai, the cultivation of my mental state is still insufficient.”
“Brother Man Gan, your capabilities are the strongest, there is no need to be too anxious right?” Zong Jue said in a low voice.
Man Gan also tried to suppress the surge of emotions in his heart, and only nodded.
Calm?
If any single one of the other people were to know of that scroll’s existence, he would not be calm, nor would he also be able to become calm.
*Peng!*
A crisp, shattering sound once again rang out.
“Yan Shan is dead.” Ao Xu’s facial expression changed. The facial expressions of many experts also became quite unsightly.
Of the Dragon Clan’s three great Elders, Yan Shan’s capabilities were of course ranked as first. At the very most, it was more or less comparable to the earlier Reverend Ming Liang and Wu Kong Xue. Since even Yan Shan was dead, the difficulty of that Blue Clouds Road could only be left to imaginations.
“The Dragon Clan’s turn is over, it should be the wilderness Demon Clan’s turn.” Ao Feng looked at Man Gan.
Man Gan slowly said, “Kong Cao, it is up to you.”
“Yes, My Lord.”
Kong Cao did not actually have much confidence, but he still accepted the orders and stepped onto the Blue Clouds Road.
Nine-Headed Snake Kong Cao was still the leader of the three great huge Demons under Yu Liang’s direct command. The strength of his capabilities was second only to Yu Liang in the wilderness. However, even so, Kong Cao also did not have much confidence.
“Sent to his death,” Hua Yan said with a faint smile.
Du Zhong Jun also nodded in agreement.
In the eyes of those six great leaders, their subordinates were meant to be sent to their deaths while exploring the road. Moreover, after finally arriving at the Nine Heavens, there would definitely be many treasures. They also did not want their subordinates to take away most of the treasures.
Indeed, as expected, after close to eight hours had passed, Kong Cao’s Soul Jade Slip also shattered.
With the sequential death of the experts one at a time, the atmosphere at the plaza became quite oppressive.
“Next should be one of Zong Jue’s men,” Hua Yan looked at Zong Jue.
At that moment, Zong Jue only had one person — The Petrification Beast, Transform Into Stone. Zong Jue took a look at Transform Into Stone, then helplessly said, “Transform Into Stone, your powers are still quite special. If you are lucky, there is still a chance of survival.”
Transform Into Stone only nodded, then stepped into the Blue Clouds Road.
“Why do I feel as if the Blue Clouds Road is a road of death?” Qin Yu looked at that Blue Clouds Road which was close to five thousand kilometers long, that led to the Nine Heavens. That Blue Clouds Road which was surrounded by countless flocks of blue clouds gave him an oppressive feeling.
The entrance to the Blue Clouds Road was like a huge, bloody mouth.
*Hou……* That familiar roar once again rang forth.
However, after merely a moment, that roar disappeared.
“Huh, Transform Into Stone cleared the first trial at a very fast speed,” Hua Yan said with a smile. At one side, Du Zhong Jun also agreed. At that moment, only Hua Yan and the other super experts were still slightly more relaxed. The other people were all very anxious.
After six hours.
The ‘Soul Jade Slip’ belonging to Transform Into Stone once again cracked and burst into pieces. That represented that yet another expert had his soul scattered into nothingness.
“A pity,” Hua Yan sighed and said, “At the beginning, it was from the side of the Loose Immortals to the side of the Chaotic Astral Sea. Now, it will be reversed, and turns will be cycled from the side of the Chaotic Astral Sea to the side of the Loose Immortals. The Chaotic Astral Sea, Zong Jue, do not have anyone under him left. It should be someone from the wilderness Demon Clan’s turn to make a move.”
“Shut up, I know the rules.”
Man Gan looked at the only person under his direct command — Yu Liang.
“Yu Liang, do not disappoint me,” Man Gan said in a low voice.
“My Lord, be at ease,” Yu Liang said while giving a faint smile and a bow. That Yu Liang obviously had a different bearing.
At the domain level of a Twelfth Tribulation Loose Demon, the Divine Beast ‘Heavenly Mouse’ was also a High Class Divine Beast. With regard to capabilities, he was absolutely the strongest person from the beginning until that moment.
After Yu Liang had stepped onto the Blue Clouds Road, his figure immediately disappeared after leaving behind a momentary image.
“No way, right? Unless, this Yu Liang is thinking of relying on speed and directly charge to the other end of the Blue Clouds Road in one breath?” Du Zhong Jun said in a shocked tone.
Ao Feng nodded and praised, “It might still really succeed. Ah, after all, this Yu Liang’s true form is the ‘Heavenly Mouse’. With regard to his speed, I estimate that amongst all of us, only Brother Zong Jue is able to win him by a head.”
Meanwhile, at that moment, the three people over at Qin Yu’s side all stood up. That was because Hou Fei and Hei Yu were about to Ascend.
“Big Brother,” Hei Yu looked at Qin Yu, and his eyes were already moist.
“How old are you, for you to still have this kind of appearance. All right…… Big Brother promise you, that no matter what, I will definitely go to the Demon Realm and find both of you,” Qin Yu’s heart was also feeling completely sour. When he was a child, without his father to care for him, both him and the similarly lonely Xiao Hei had depended on each other.
How many years has it been……
The feelings between him and Xiao Hei, were definitely comparable to the feelings between real brothers.
The upper skies actually began to shake, and a kind of special energy began to blanket over the entire Ni Yang’s Realm. When faced against that kind of energy, all of the Restrictive Spells in Ni Yang’s Realm were unable to obstruct it.
That was the power of the Heavens!
It was at that time, that Man Gan, Zong Jue, Hua Yan and the others then looked over at Qin Yu and his two brothers. When they saw how those three brothers were reluctant to part, they knew that Hou Fei and Hei Yu were really about to Ascend.
“Big Brother, you must definitely go to the Demon Realm and find us,” Hou Fei said solemnly.
Qin Yu could only nod.
Brilliant rays of light were shot down from the skies, directly enveloping both Hou Fei and Hei Yu…… Enveloped by those blinding rays of splendor, both Hou Fei and Hei Yu instead continued to gaze at Qin Yu. They were both secretly expectant, expecting for Qin Yu to succeed in creating the ‘Stellar Transformations’ technique, thus being able to successfully Ascend.
“I will definitely go and find the both of you,” Qin Yu said resolutely.
The three brothers continued to exchange gazes……
Both Hou Fei and Hei Yu began to rise into the air, the energy enveloping their entire bodies became increasingly more powerful. Merely after a while, both of them were completely transformed into two globes of white light. The space was seen to momentarily tremble, and the both of them had then disappeared.
“Xiao Hei, Fei Fei.”
Qin Yu’s heart became completely cold.
His entire heart was as cold as ice, the deepest recesses of his heart frozen.
That Xiao Hei, often with an unconcerned appearance, but was instead as close to him as a real brother, had already left. That Fei Fei, often with a gleeful appearance, but also treated him as a brother, had also left.
“Li Er is gone, Xiao Hei and Fei Fei are also gone. Eldest Brother and Second Brother have their own families. Royal Father also has Eldest Brother, Second Brother, and Uncle Feng together as a group. Only I…… am alone.”
At that very moment, Qin Yu experienced an unprecedented feeling of loneliness.
OH Early!
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2 Firsts LOLs
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Huhuhu~
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Seems like things incased in “” disappear???
Test:
Test:
Test: [Test]
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nice
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You go, Wu Hei! You can make it. Come on. Don’t die too quickly.
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Goooooooood job 😛
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Yipeee,
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nice rylain! thanks a lot!
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“definitely did not break…” yet
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Thanks for the teaser
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thank you
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honorable rylain, might we know when you will have time in your life to release the next chapter? thank you for your hard work!
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I will begin translating Chapter 49 on Monday, while translating Transcending The Nine Heavens today and tomorrow, hopefully finishing its Chapter 1.
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thanks alot my man
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to short! i will definitely avoid reading the teaser this time!
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I love how all the loose immortals are just cannon fodder for them to test for danger. Poor guys. lol
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I wonder how Wu Hei survived
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Wu Hei should a bit stronger so he probably survived because of that
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And just think how shocked they’ll all be when Qin Yu just walks in after the test to join them like it’s nothing. Man, it’s nice to have a 9th ranked gold immortal in your pocket!
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GMT+1 here, I really like your timezone Rylain 😀 if you will post a chap, it will be done latest at afternoon here, on the other hand I don’t like waiting for certain someone’s chapters late at night coz of GMT-6 XD
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Hoho, welcome mine fellow european gmt+1 friend
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GMT+1 rules
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Don’t think it’s all about one’s strength… Ni Yang also said that even Mystic Immortals may not be able to successfully get his treasure… Beside, where would that leave our troll-bro? My money is LUCK! One must have luck to survive!
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Transcending the nine heavens… Hmmm. Since a character there is called Qin Wu, I can’t attempt to read it seriously since it seems to mesh nicely in context with ST.
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LoL! You think too much.
They are written in completely different styles, and Transcending The Nine Heavens have more emotions and humor in it… I just hope than I can correctly translate the humor as they are meant to be read.
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Sadly I don’t think. The words come out and my minds;s processes are blocked.
Language barriers. It can make well chosen words; alliteration and all the other cool stuff like rhyme and flowing/sonorous words change in translation. (Is Weed-kun really that apathetic? Is it meant to be funny? etc)
So I would never try translation.
Rylain, you dastardly swine, you. Butchering all those squiggly lines and making them somewhat readable, you heathen! >:Z
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Isn’t Weed from LMS?
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Sigh…
I just tried mtling this chapter, and now my brain hurts TT
Thanks for translating this Rylain,
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I foresee quite a lot of work to do this week, but I will try to get this chapter out on Tuesday.
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Yipeeee
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I laughed so hard thanks to your comment !! I’m at GMT +1 so in my country it’s 19/04/2015 !! it’s like you are in the future…how does it look like ? I know i’m a bit idiotic but it’s not my fault… ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ
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Gmt+1 to brotha? it´s quite nice living with our time zones..
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Did I help at all…? :))) hopefully I did. I can see why translating is painstakingly difficult, well, at least for someone (me) who has poor proficiency in the chinese language (common, names and their famous proverbs =.=”)
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I couldn’t wait so I translated some more after the teaser…hehe, but I really need to improve my chinese in any case, because currently my proficiency is far too poor ;(. :
This is my first time translating Chinese texts; to be honest, I can’t actually read most Chinese characters, and rather I’m only familiar with pinyin, that’s why my progress is really slow and (probably not very accurate). I think I’ll just take a bystander vantage after this if it is not up to scratch, and plus it takes 4 times longer for someone else who is more proficient than I.
Cheers. Thunderhill
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Everyone else watched afar as Wu Hei stepped onto the Blue Cloud Road Road, but due to the thick mists and hanging clouds enshrouding the ‘Blue Cloud Road’, and to everyone’s chagrin, it is impossible to perceive what is happening to Wu Hei. However, in just a few moments, a second roar of a beast is heard.
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[TL: Blue Cloud Road (Su-is the old translation, but I can’t really see how 秦 can be blue. At best I think it should be a simple road of clouds, where simple = 秦. So I’ll just go with Blue Cloud Road for continuity]
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At Qin Yu’s side, Hou Fei quietly utters, “Looks like Wu Hei is another who has stepped into his own death”
At this, Qin Yu nods
‘Blue Cloud Road’ is at least several thousands of ‘li’ in length, however previously, Reverend Ming Shan died immediately after he entered the Blue Cloud Road. From this Qin Yu can deduce that
Reverend Ming Shan had not even traversed a tenth of the distance, which means the Reverend did not even encounter the real danger before dying pitifully.
But does this indicate how much stronger is Wu Hei compared to Reverend Ming Shan?
“Roarrr….!” A loud and angry roar rings forth momentarily then quietens.
At this instance, Du Zhong Jun, Man Gan and many others all look at Wu Hei’s Soul Jade slip that is resting on the ground to find that his Soul Jade slip has not split apart, and definitely not broken at the slightest.
“Looks like, Wu Hei has successfully passed the first challenge on the Blue Cloud Road”, whilst looking at Du Zhong Jun, Man Gan smiles and continues, “Du Zhong Jun, perhaps Wu Hei may reach the goal at the end of the Blue Cloud Road – The Nine Heavens.
Du Zhong Jun only smiles at this.
But, how can one reach the end of the Blue Cloud Road so easily? That moment ago when everyone in the White Jade Plaza heard the roar, meant that the battleground is very close to the Plaza.
“However, that does not mean Wu Hei has reached The Nine Heavens, but rather indicate that he has traversed a longer distance than Reverend Ming Shan”, Du Zhong Jun can definitely see this and glances at Hua Yan to see that he is satisfied with this.
Hua Yan calmly, with a deadpan expression, listens for any sounds coming from further down the Blue Cloud Road.
“Hm, that is Battle Spirit Energies colliding”, Ao Feng frowns and says, “The first time, it is the beast’s roar, in that case at the beginning of the Blue Cloud Road, there are many types of demonic beasts……But now and again, there are signs of Battle Spirit Energies colliding. In that case, this means there are people still left in Ni Yang’s Realm.”
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[TL: Took 恩 en, as hm which is like a grunt indicating one agrees or a sound that says one is affirmative about something (I think). I also took 劲气 jin qi, as Battle Spirit Energy, And 妖兽 yao shou, as Demonic Beast]
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Even if it is a Demonic Beast that can kill Reverend Ming Shan must be a xiuyaoist. Especially one that is at least the Reverend’s level.
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[TL: that was hard. I’m guessing that 修**身 xiu ** shen/zhen, refers to xiuyaoist in this case because they are talking about a beast. Took 有人的智慧了 you ren de zhi hui le, means having a person’s wisdom which I’m guessing rathers to enlightenment level of the Reverend]
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Ni Yang’s Realm is indeed not uninhabited, but contains live Demonic Beasts and humans in midst the central region of the Road.
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[TL: 人类 ren lei, usually means humanity or humans as a species, so I wasn’t too sure here. I took其中地 qi zhong de, as referring to the region of the Blue Cloud Road]
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Man Gan also frowns then nods and says: “hm, Ni Yang’s Realm could have his subordinates guarding the road. No….no.”
Man Gan’s Eyes suddenly flashes, and ponders: “Since Mystic Immortal Emperor Ni Yang must enter his realm from the Mortal Realm must mean he definitely could not have subordinates with him.”
“Where does the current subordinate come from? Then where can that beast’s roar come as well?”
With this, Man Gan calmly continues to ponder, “Unless Immortal Emperor Ni Yang brought over people from the Mortal Realm. But that can’t be, where did those people, who teleported into his Realm, come from?
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[TL: not too sure about the last sentence separated by the comma. I took 飞升境界 fei sheng jing jie, as Teleportation]
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“Unless its ten thousand……” Instantly, Man Gan’s eyes flashes again.
Ao Feng, in turn, gives Man Gan an awkward smile.
Man Gan then gives Ao Feng a mocking smile.
Conversely, both Hua Yan and Du Zhong Jun did not even thought of questioning where the Beast’s cry came from.
Using Man Gan’s Holy Sense Communication, he directly sent: “Brother Ao Feng, do you even want to compete with me in this thing as well?” ‘He does not want to allow Du Zhong Jun or Hua Yan know about this particular thing being here in Ni Yang’s Realm.
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[TL: not sure if he is swearing at Ao Feng or not by calling him 这东西 zhe dong xi, or does he actually mean ‘a thing’. So I took it literally as ‘a thing’]
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“Brother Man Gan, don’t mention the name of that thing, it just that Axis Drill. I can’t believe you also guessed the identity of that particular treasure. I also can’t believe that particular treasure could be found in Ni Yang’s Realm, in that case this is a shockingly good revelation. To find that particular treasure outside the border of the Demon Realm, really makes one greatly envious of the owner. In the entirety of Ni Yang’s Realm, this treasured Axis Drill should be second best so far. I would have thought that Emperor Ni Yang would take this with him rather than leave this in his ‘Ni Yang Realm’. If one obtains this scroll…..ha, if I was an ordinary golden dragon who obtain this treasure, my status and power within the Dragon Realm would be equivalent that of a 5-Clawed Golden Dragon.”
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[TL: m not too sure about the 2nd to last sentence. Also need help with the name of the treasure (卷轴), I thought it was called Axis Drill because I don’t really want to call it a rotating axis/axle]
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Using Holy Sense Communication, Ao Feng conveyed that the treasure must be the ‘Axis Drill’.
“Bravo, so you want it as well, but I also want it too. When the time comes it will all be decided by our capabilities.” Man Gan says with Holy Sense Communication.
Ao Feng is also right about it and gives Man Gan an indifferent smile.
~To Be Continued~
Hopefully, Rylain does not mind me doing this…I still like your translations better, honestly.
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Drill to mine?
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Probably go with Axis Rod instead. I’m going to have to make do with that.
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just go help with Swallowed Star, someone finally should XD
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Swallowed Star realy need some help the chapter isnt long
but 1 chapter a week is gone take years until complete
i stil apreciate that is being translate but it is really slow
soory for my english
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50 so years by the translators calculations……… yeah either a new translator helps or some of us may never live to see the end.
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What is swallowed star? never heard of it….hmm I’ll consider it but I need the raw (all of it if complete). and btw, my rate of translating is reaaallly bad (need to improve)
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swallowed star is just another light novel by IET and its very good, it is currently being translated by aequitas but he translates just once a week… I think that he would really like if u help him… you could leave him a message or something on spcnet website… just go to google and type in swallowed star… then go to the link with spcnet website and go to the latest page in the thread and just leave a message to aequitas that u cud help him… also, even if u translate very slowly im sure u wud b able to translate atleast once a week right? so just even once a week means we wud get two chapters which is a lot better than just one (Obviously)… if u decide to help then thanks a lot but if not then thanks anyways
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Eeh, you call that bad? if yea compare it to machine translation then you got the difference between heaven and earth.. Don´t call what yea translated for bad stuff cause it´s something really good lol
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And this should be the raws..
http://read.qidian.com/BookReader/1639199.aspx
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Really good story of IET. It follows a boy named Lou Feng which has extraordinary luck
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ps. here is the one I used for the MT
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Swallowed Star
http://www.spcnet.tv/forums/showthread.php/38495-Swallowed-Star/
It is currently translated by Zebulin.
Latest Release: Volume 4 Chapter 20
If you want to help translate, it is good to send a PM to Zebulin on spcnet forum 🙂
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Urg, i think thunderhill better refrain himself for try translate another TL work without their consent. I just do not want Arifureta chapter 80 incident repeated for Stellar Transformation, that En Do stopped translating for 1 week.
sorry if i offended you.
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I’ll put the completed one (and future chapters) on wuxia>forums>[Unofficial] Stellar Transformations From Bk11c48, because I can start new topics there, otherwise it will get a tad messy here with overly long comment sections.
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If you can’t find it. http://www.wuxiaworld.com/forums/topic/unofficial-stellar-transformations-continued-from-bk11c48/
On a side note should I put them here instead>?
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Hi, Rylain are you doing chapter 50+51 aye? should I start chap 52?
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He hasn’t even replied once, and you seem to be getting the wrong idea. Rylain has said multiple times that he’s translating this series on his own, regardless of other people’s translations of it. If you want to post your translations on Wuxia World, that’s up to you and there’s nothing wrong with it. But I’m hoping that Rylain maintains his one-man solo job of translating Stellar Transformations. Not to be rude, but his quality is higher and It’d be nice to have a consistent quality.
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Hi everyone,
Sorry, I’m busy with my Nine of Nine Heavenly Tribulations at work (Fifth Heavenly Trial at the moment), so I’ll summarise a quick response to the comments:
@thunderhill: Hi thunderhill, as some of the Readers have said, I’m doing the translations of Stellar Transformations based on my own interpretations of the novel. There are some details that I do not agree on the translations of other translators, so that was why I took up translating it, from where He-Man left off, as I continue to read along. I do not mind you translating it, but helping you review your translations will have to wait until I have some spare time, with my intention ONLY to help you improve your translation skills. I can help with some tips and minor things, but not full-scale, as that is also why I declined to collaborate with others (spending time doing extra tasks where I might as well have done it alone).
I took a glance, and can personally give the following corrections as I have already translated the parts you have commented here:
1. Blue Clouds Road – This is one important thing you must take note, which plays a huge part in translation quality: correcting mistakes in the original text. If you refer to the previous chapters or other sites’ version of the text, ‘青云路’ was used, translating to Blue Clouds Road. Well, 青 is actually a greenish-blue colour, and traditionally used to refer blue more, while modernly used to refer green more.
2. 其中地 – actually 其中的. Text error that made you confused. Just treat it as ‘其中’.
3. 飞升 – Ascension. 境界 – depends how it is used. For this novel, sometimes it is used to refer to stage of practise (domain level), while sometimes it is used to mean ‘realm’ or ‘domain’. In this case, it refers to stage of practise.
4. 卷轴 – A reel / scroll. ‘卷’ is the unit of measurement.
5. Holy Sense – I completely disagree on this term’s usage, and that it was used too generally. There are actually 2 ways of using Spiritual Awareness for communication. First is via a Transmission Talisman. Second is via Sound Transfer. I have made a Glossary for these terms.
@other Readers: I thought Swallowed Star was translated by Zebulin?
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Thanks for the Chapter
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Thanks for the protip, Rylain! yeah I didn’t know how to correctly translate 境界, because its widely in different situations. and thanks for the clear up on artifact name (originally I went with scroll but then it didn’t quite fit the context on the later sentences, so I thought it must have been an Equipment/Weapon; scroll didn’t sound cool enough so I scratched it.)
@Holy Sense, yeah, its used so loosely. I was tempted to use telepathy, but that wasn’t very eastern culture-friendly term. IDK it was odd. Sound Transfer was odd too, but I get why you chose it – to be different then the over used term holy sense and it’s closer to the chinese meaning of it, aye.
I guess I correct it a bit. Thanks Rylain.
@WhoopWhoop: Wow swallowed star is a really long series. and (my version) chapters and volumes are really messed up in the txt file
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thunder, why not just make a wordpress site and translate stellar transformation with your own skill and swallow star at the same time? i’m sure everyone would like that.
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So I took your advice. thundertranslations.wordpress.com/. But I’m a newbie to wordpress sites so if anyone who is better at this please give me suggestions.
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Bro it looks good man!! i’ll be following your page till the end of time!! will you be translating other novels on your site?
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what are you guys talking about, I suggested Swallowed Star TL’ed by Zebulin not Aquetias, ST doesn’t need another translator, thuderhill you won’t even know the difference, ST, SS, CD they’re all great, even I can’t tell which is better and all by the same author
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don’t forget DE [Desolate Era] it is showing great promise 😀
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Yea seriously, SS really needs a translator or maybe i should just learn chinese… or naah.. who am i kidding.. i can´t even pull of german after 2-3 years 1-2hours a week even tho imma a swede… (the languages are close to each other, like 20-30%)
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The Chinese language requires a lot of time to be spent on memorising. After that comes the understanding, which is a lot harder since some phrases have meanings within a meaning.
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I am worried now… cry cry cry
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worried Now, cry cry cry
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Hi everyone, sorry stuck in office doing overtime. I’ll have to release this chapter tomorrow… take a rest for tonight guys.
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´sniff´ its ´sniff´ okay… ´cry a lot´
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thank you for keeping us informed.
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ty for informing us 😀
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Thanks for telling us
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sorry guys meant to say zebulin not aequitas… also forgot to thank you for translations rylain, thanks… i really appreciate ur translations, i used to go on wuxiaworld to read it their but after reading yours it seems to me that ur translations are pretty good unlike what i had heard before and also it comes out a lot faster.. thanks alot
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Hi everyone, the chapter will be out in 4 hours. I might overrun an hour or so, no need to be alarmed.
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Finally some certain (most likely) news of the new chapter. Thanks in advance.
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It will be out within 2 hours.
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it’s so considerate of you to let us know the approximate time of release.
tq
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Hi everyone, the chapter is up. I’m currently doing the teaser for the next chapter.
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Thanks Rylain! 🙂
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Thanks for the chapter! =)
Btw, I think figurehead was used wrongly there.
Figurehead means someone that is a nominal leader but doesnt hold any real power. It should be the opposite right ?
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Hi Unbreak, you are right. I got it mixed up since its direct translation is ‘huge head’. I’ll change it after I do the teaser. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
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Thank you! I can’t wait to see what Quin Yu does now!
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Thank you for the translation!
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Thanks for the chapter!
I think that thanks to the ascension a new road will show up, looking forward to that,
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Thanks for the chapter. Next chapter should be a blast, if I’m guessing correctly.
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Thanks for the chapter!
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Thanks for the chapter
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Reblogged this on Novel Translation Reblog.
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DAMMIT! THE FEELS ;_;
Why is it that I’d have to go to sleep feeling like this?!
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I got immune. Feels sort of lacklustre compared to the author who wrote Transcending The Nine Heavens. Then again, the simplicity to translate it makes me thankful… Translating Nine Heavens gives me nightmares. LoL!
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well when the first chapter is like that else would you expect >_>
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Having had a puppy that I raised and grew up with and finally had to part with after ~12 years, the scene of Qin Yu, Hei Yu, and Hou Fei having that tearful ‘farewell’ for now… really struck a cord 😦 Made me a bit envious that at least they got to say their good byes and cya laters… 😦 Mine was a bit more permanent…
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Du Zhong Jun, maybe he’ll have the same luck as the chance to step on dog shit, and actually arrive that the other end of the Blue Clouds Road — The Nine Heavens huh
You should change that to at
Du Zhong Jun, maybe he’ll have the same luck as the chance to step on dog shit, and actually arrive at the other end of the Blue Clouds Road — The Nine Heavens huh
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Hi I3omb,
Thank you. I corrected it.
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Qin Yu looked at that the Blue Clouds Road which was close to five thousand kilometers long, that led to the Nine Heavens.
You do not need that the, it should either be
Qin Yu looked at that Blue Clouds Road which was close to five thousand kilometers long, that led to the Nine Heavens.
or
Qin Yu looked at the Blue Clouds Road which was close to five thousand kilometers long, that led to the Nine Heavens.
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Hi I3omb,
Thank you once again. I corrected it.
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Thanks.
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Thanks mate for the update!!
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This is so lonely
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Aww… do you want a hug?
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Group hug!!
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Thank you very much for the translation almighty Rylain! Many thanks towards the Author!
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do you know this thundertranslation. he seems to have just started translating stellar too. are you guys working together?
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Hi mattdgen,
No, we are not working together. I am aware, but that is his entitlement. Readers also have the right to read what they want to.
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